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Lost Laughter
Contributed by
Chenobi
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Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have a smile
But I don't know how to wear it today
You lost all your laughter by laughing too loud
So sad when you say
"Darling, it really makes me cry
Whenever you're here with me"
Wind pushes my fingers
Like diamonds push away friends
Wind loses it's meaning
Like youth will in the end
I'm afraid to laugh too loud
Afraid of losing the ability to even smile
So I cry instead
Because I know I can do without
My mistake
Copyright ©
Chenobi
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2003-06-12 05:25:00]
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Re: Lost Laughter
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:11:00 AM AEST
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very well written
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Re: Lost Laughter
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:43:51 AM AEST
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Great write!!!
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Re: Lost Laughter
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST
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| Here I will agree with you. Sometimes pouring out your feelings, no matter in the form of crying or what, really helps you a lot and makes you feel way better. It's a good write. Keep it up! |
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Re: Lost Laughter
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by wordsmith on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 02:58:46 PM AEST
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| You have a lot to share and you say it well. Very vulnerable. |
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