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Look up to a better day
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don’t give up
Let your dreams take flight
Come out from the darkness
And step into the light
Look up to the sky
Smile to a better day
Let yourself free
And throw all your worries away
Unchain your heart from all the pain
Wipe all your tears away
Just smile with happiness
And everything will be okay
Never give up on what you believe
Never let your dreams die
Believe you can make it
So take a chance and try
Don’t give up on hope
Don’t throw your life away
Just look to the sky
And look up to a better day.
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youngpoet1989
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2003-06-11 22:45:00]
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:18:50 PM AEST
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refreshing and a very good write, uplifting
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:48:25 PM AEST
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Very uplifting!! Thanks for sharing this...
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by knowWhat_kind on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 12:44:37 AM AEST
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| Very nice write for such a young poet. I was maybe your age when I started writing. I am only a couples of years older but very nice |
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 02:30:21 AM AEST
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Nice write.Very uplifting.
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:42:16 AM AEST
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| If people read this everyday, what a wonderful world this would be. Thanks... |
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:32:39 PM AEST
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| Refreshing and lovely ... well written ... Jan |
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by blueheart on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:14:21 AM AEST
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| Encouraging and inspiring. Good write. :) |
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by Saira on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:58:48 PM AEST
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| A lovely write....feeling much better after reading it :-) |
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Re: Look up to a better day
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:42:31 AM AEST
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I liked this... very much
'Unchain your heart from all the pain
Wipe all your tears away'
I liked those two lines they spoke to me a lot. You write with such feeling.
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