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Prisoner
Contributed by
evil_demon
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Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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I am a prisoner inside myself
my mind is locked in a cell.
Emotions are all locked up
kept hidden so the world can not know.
They can not know what I feel
nor can they know what I wish.
They can not know why I cry
and they can`t feel what I feel.
One day I will be realeased
somebody will have the key
that will set my heart and mind free.
I think I found that person
but they went away.
so now I am a prisoner
and that is how I will stay.
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evil_demon
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2003-06-11 18:05:00]
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Re: Prisoner
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:31:49 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh this is so much like me, it's eerie. I used to feel that the real me was locked up inside my head, and that I wasn't really me, and that in order to become myself again, I had to find the key, someone that would set me free and allow me to be me. Well, I found him, and he wasn't who I thought he would be. But I'm happy to say I no longer feel like I'm a prisoner in my own head, and I hope you find the same freedom I have. Good luck, and excellent poem.
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Re: Prisoner
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by Fairy on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:36:16 PM AEST
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| I would just like to say, I'm soo sorry and I know that depression can be a killer that never seems to fade, but don't ever give up...Jess |
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Re: Prisoner
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:56:00 PM AEST
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Hmmm Just today I felt the same way...Like a prisoner in my life.... such a good write...
Jenni |
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Re: Prisoner
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by Kirby on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 11:24:18 AM AEST
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| Everyone in their right mind feel this way some time or other. It's just great to see that someone else feel this way too. Great Poem. Love:::Kirby |
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