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Apparent Now!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
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Approaching the garden with the gates of destiny before us,
The feeling stirred within that we'd treaded this path at least two and twenty times before.
But all was ok,
As at last we were home.
Peering out from the kitchen window
I could see changes were again afoot,
Another new family were moving in next door.
The loving couple introduced themselves as they huddled on our porch
'Hi we're Peace and Tranquillity',
'And this is our new-born' they said with joyous eyes,
She's named for the sake of her auntie,
Little Pontianak'.
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Re: Apparent Now!
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:33:14 PM AEST
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yes DEan, events in lives do change, even those leopard spots. :) I liked this write. But I'm not up on the name in your last sentence, call it over my head, but can you tell me what it means? I know you always write in ways of the hidden meanings, as I do too. And I enjoyed the write, for how we all wish to have that peace and tranquility. Changes do happen as long as the person wants to do so, not someone doing it for them.
nice write. hope all is well.
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Re: Apparent Now!
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:23:12 PM AEST
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very good write, but I am also unsure about the meaning of the name.
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Re: Apparent Now!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:24:27 PM AEST
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Dean,
Yet another great poem. The way I see it change can be a good thing. Without change I think that life would get predictable and boring.
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Re: Apparent Now!
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by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:47:33 AM AEST
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Dean,
Great write. We all do need change, and I think that once life is the same for too long, we, as humans, crave it. I loved this poem, but I'm unsure what the last name means.
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Re: Apparent Now!
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by mckayla on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 11:19:42 AM AEST
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me too!! ienjoyed the poem. yes what does that name mean????????
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