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Is he my new daddy?
Contributed by
MX
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Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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“Mommy, who is this man always coming to our house?”
Why is he always kissing you?
I think he’s nice, but big sissy doesn’t like him.
She always has a frown on when he comes.
“Mommy, who is this man always coming to our house?”
He never yells at you like daddy does.
Big brother doesn’t like him because he isn’t daddy.
But I like him, he makes you smile.
“Mommy, who is this man always coming to our house?”
He’s so nice and he even brought me toys!
Why don’t they like him?
I sure do…
“Mommy, who is this man always coming to our house?”
I told daddy about this man.
Daddy got very mad and yelled at big sissy.
I’m sorry mommy, I never meant to get you in trouble.
“Mommy, who is this man always coming to our house?”
Why does daddy make you cry?
The other man never would.
Please, mommy can we have a new daddy?
“Mommy, who is this man always coming to our house?”
I know that big brother and big sissy will learn to like him like I do.
Please mommy, can we keep him?
Will he be my new daddy?
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Re: Is he my new daddy?
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:03:16 AM AEST
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lovely write...
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Re: Is he my new daddy?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:45:58 AM AEST
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Great poem. I could really sense the innocence. Fantastic!!
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Re: Is he my new daddy?
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 12:49:23 AM AEST
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maybe you don't see what they see.
I like this really. |
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Re: Is he my new daddy?
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Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:56:48 AM AEST
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| This was a good poem, i can totally understand what ur sister means. Maybe you should give him a chance. I went threw the same thing, and grew to love my stepdad! |
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Re: Is he my new daddy?
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by M on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 12:31:43 PM AEST
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Very sad. I didn't go through exactly this, but my little sister's dad is my stepdad, and i guess it is sort of the same, in a way, in that she doesn't, and may never understand exactly why he isn't my dad or whatever. it is a sad fact when young children are in such a confusing world.
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Re: Is he my new daddy?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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| This was just brilliant. My kids have had exactly this, and my youngest is closer to his stepdad than to his own daddy. The best part? This time my partner really cares about my kids, even if they aren't his. I loved the poem. |
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