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like the fire

Contributed by wassim on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

LIKE THE FIRE
it really make me feel like the fire the way it burns and it makes you hot and so red and feel the pain at the inside it's just be so hopless like my love that i want to share with you when you need it too can you feel it so body and sol i felt like it at the way you where in my blood going and being so hopless throo your dimising sol i can feel the triumph between me and my conchecnes but not to you your so special so rear so good to the joy of love you make everyday a better one to your world but not mine it care you throo the darkness and the shadows in a one way street and you can feel you heart beat and your breath i loved you like the flaming eyes like the molting tears going throo your eyes i only want you arms to make a ring around my neck like it throo my life my sol my heart i can also feel your mystical way you make that sharm that perfum you spary everyday makes it throo the wonderfull world of the breaving life of love i can see you too but can you see me notice me give a damn about me like so i can't be denied to you i am nothing to you but your everything to me.

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Re: like the fire (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:08:51 PM AEST
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dearest wassim, this is so beautiful and full of passion, i love it, your words carefully chosen, yet i will say there are a few mis-spelled, but the gentle flow carried me through this lovely write:) hugs nessa

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