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The Phantom Lady
Contributed by
norm
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Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The phantom lady came at one
Her entrance did amaze,
She smiled, looking white and drawn,
Then vanished in the haze.
The phantom lady came at two
This time she floated in,
She smiled as she beat her drum
She vanished in the din.
The phantom lady came at three
but not a sound I heard,
I knew her there, her scent aware
She vanished like a bird.
She did not come at four or five
my disappointment showed,
I prayed she'd show at six or eight
Her beauty ala mode.
But ne'er again did I espy
This phantom lady mine,
I know not if I ever saw
This gorgeous spiritine.
spiritine=normword
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norm
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2003-06-11 03:25:00]
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 06:09:13 AM AEST
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lol I like your word! Love the poem too. I could almost picture her... love the topic, wonderfully written!
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:23:28 AM AEST
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| I have a weakness for poetry of this nature....and this one was very well done! Larry |
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:38:04 AM AEST
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Cool write....hope she comes again....
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:19:57 AM AEST
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Ooooooh! Really good. i really enjoyed this one...
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:13:39 AM AEST
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very good, great word
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:24:43 AM AEST
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Great write. Norm I dont have the phantom Lady at this place but the boogy man instead!! I would rather trade you!! Loved this poem by the way.
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 08:56:53 AM AEST
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Norm your poems are the most enjoyable I've read on YPDC. Don't you get stuck for ideas sometime?
I always want to join in.........
I have a phantom Teddy Bear
he comes to me from "you know where"
across the distant "over there"
where bears are very very rare.
The biggest bear you ever saw
spreads fifteen feet from claw to claw
I'd like to say what he comes for
but I can't think of any more
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by DreamCatcher on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 05:04:08 PM AEST
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Wow, great poem. It flows nicely and it has a mysterious, mystical essence. Love it!
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Re: The Phantom Lady
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 05:27:36 AM AEST
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Hey Norm, who said you could write about my wife, just playing great write, I really enjoyed. Now about that teddy bear I don't know, But I too have a Phantom lady, lol. Great write.
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