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The Sky is Falling
Contributed by
MX
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Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everything I've ever known,
unraveled and undone.
I don't know where to turn.
I don't know where to run.
It's not about God,
because I'm losing so much faith.
And I cannot catch my breath,
I cannot win this race.
I believed you,
when you said you'd never leave my side.
And i believed you,
when you said "sorry" for all the nights we cried.
What happened to the family,
the one we used to be?
I know it's not my fault,
I know it wasn't me.
But somewhere deep inside,
I still want to believe.
To believe It's all wrong,
and It's not going to be this way.
To believe that It's not real and you are going to stay.
I wanted it so bad, but the pain won't go away.
There is no more reasom, no more faith left in me.
If there is an answer, It's not one I can see.
I cannot keep stalling.
It's not fair to you.
Finally, I can see throught this false reality,
I opened up my eyes and the sky was falling.
I cannot do this anymore.
Let the sky fall.
Copyright ©
MX
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2003-06-10 20:45:00]
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Re: The Sky is Falling
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 09:42:21 PM AEST
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very good write strong emotions shown
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Re: The Sky is Falling
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by norm on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:05:44 PM AEST
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The poem is fine
May I comment on the theme
throughout your life, people will come and go
The sooner you accept this, the more adult you grow
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Re: The Sky is Falling
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by Daydreamer on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 12:05:14 AM AEST
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| This was a good write...I understand what you are going through and with time things will feel more natural and not so outta place and wrong. I enjoyed your write a lot `daydreamer` |
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Re: The Sky is Falling
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:44:13 AM AEST
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Wow! I can relate to the feelings you are having.
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