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Soaring along the skies of a dream
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I lay myself onto the cold plain
watching the sapphire blue sky
As the clouds roll by I form
different images in my head
The ocean sparkles with gleam
like a 1000 diamonds reflecting the sun
The cool breeze running at me
like a stampede
The sun shines above me
slowly setting on it's own time
falling asleep as the moon and stars
awake in the night
I watch as an aurora borealis
fills up the starry sky
with beautiful shades of green
I count the falling stars as they
soar along the beautiful sky above
And I think to myself
Will I ever get to soar along those
beautiful skies I watch above me
Will I ever get that far
One day I hope I too can fly along
the morning and starry skies
Like a bird soaring along the winds
above the earth and beyond all life
Soaring along the skies of a dream.
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youngpoet1989
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2003-06-10 19:25:00]
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Re: Soaring along the skies of a dream
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 08:17:19 PM AEST
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exquisite write,, you have soared in your words and took the reader with you. this is excellent,, more please
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Re: Soaring along the skies of a dream
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 09:25:09 PM AEST
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beautifully written! i love it!
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Soaring along the skies of a dream
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 12:39:10 AM AEST
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Wonderful imagery!! thank you for sharing this with us...
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Re: Soaring along the skies of a dream
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:20:06 AM AEST
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| This write is a breath of fresh air in a stagnant world....very well done! Larry |
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Re: Soaring along the skies of a dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:50:22 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. I felt as though I was soaring through the sky next to you.
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