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Broken
Contributed by
MX
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A picture, broken.
Glass shattered.
Tears falling.
Why won't you listen?
Looking down, I see the picture.
It's broken.
Why do I hear the screams so loud?
They're cursing my efforts to stay alive.
All I wanted was peace.
But It's not given freely.
It comes at a cost,
a scar, a bad dream.
Never is it free.
I need you to understand.
Still cursing me, screaming at me.
I long to silence them.
To give in.
But they are broken.
Within the picture, broken.
Just like me.
Copyright ©
MX
... [
2003-06-10 18:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 06:16:42 PM AEST (User
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this is a sad, but wonderfully written poem, i like this |
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 06:23:54 PM AEST (User
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Wow! This is a good write. Simple words but hold a great depth. Loved it! |
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Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 07:29:09 PM AEST (User
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if the picture is symbolic
to the way you live your life
pick up all the pieces
and resume your daily strife... |
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