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Mistakes
Contributed by
Darien
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can't help but wonder
As I look back with a sigh
Could she ever want me
My hopes get so high
But then I recall
Mistakes I've made before
When I decided to give it a try
And went and knocked at her door
And the hatred she must harbor
For such a strange one like me
Yet I can't help but love her
If only she could see
I pass her each day
Our paths always cross
I always steal a glance
Thinking of what I've lost
It's hard to be alone
Holding someone in your heart
When that person doesn't want you
And you caused it from the start
Copyright ©
Darien
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2003-06-10 16:05:00]
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Re: Mistakes
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by JamesHowlett on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:32:38 PM AEST
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This is truely a great poem. I understand how you feel. Keep writing.
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Re: Mistakes
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:02:21 PM AEST
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well written beautiful poem
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Re: Mistakes
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 12:56:13 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem ... well written ... Jan |
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Re: Mistakes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:11:58 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful peom. So sad.... keep writing...
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