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To call one Sane
Contributed by
Darien
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Crashing through into tomorrow
Breaking the bonds that hold
Restraining me from madness
And the impurities I hold
The scum and filth that infect my thoughts
The ruination of my brain
Through past years and endless fights
Just to be called sane
But why should I try
And what can be called sane
Maybe I'm the one that's right
And all of you are to blame
Whatever the cause of my mental state
It's mine to keep controlled
And surely I will or at least should
Because that is what I'm told
Copyright ©
Darien
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2003-06-10 15:25:00]
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Re: To call one Sane
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:30:05 PM AEST
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I liked this enjoyed the image of you breaking through your bonds. Hang in there hope to see more from you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: To call one Sane
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:04:31 PM AEST
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| well written, and what is sane?, if you are not a threat to yourself or others than what does it matter? |
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Re: To call one Sane
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 07:47:13 PM AEST
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| Great write, and besides, "sane" is a matter of opinion. It's all perspective. To an insane person, sane people are insane and insane people are sane. so who cares? haha, well written, luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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