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Emotion's Ballad 1 - To Sympathy
Contributed by
uncooked
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Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 11:25:00 AM in AEST
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How can you be okay
How can you come to school each day
How can you get up each morning
How come life has dealt you such a terrible hand
How does your love not decay
Why is it so unfair
You're in highschool, these are your prime years
They're not supposed to be soaked in fears and tears
And blood and grief, with no one to care
How can you live,
And why do you give me a chance
When I haven't seen half the world you've trudged
Or experienced that flawless trance
That 'proudly-sheltered' push you out of
It's so unfair
You're so beautiful
Promise you'll never go
Cause if you leave, I'm going to follow
We're not meant to hike these hills alone
The footing's bad, and I'm tripping now
I need you to pick me up
And show me how
To live again
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2003-06-10 11:25:00]
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Re: Emotion's Ballad 1 - To Sympathy
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 05:21:19 AM AEST
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"if you leave, I'm going to follow" - I love that line! I really like this poem, it's so unselfish and sympathetic. How much you care about whoever this is about really comes through in your words. Great job!
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Re: Emotion's Ballad 1 - To Sympathy
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by Lele on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:49:31 AM AEST
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| i like this the swing is sweet nad the treatment is so light. |
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