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Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
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Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Life goes on around me as I sit here and write this.
Suicidal thoughts consume my very being,
Transforming my soul into a whirlwind of dispair.
This unfair catastrophe known as life is beginning to be more than I can handle.
Internallly im withering away.
My inner thoughts and emotions are rapidly rotting.
My heart is slowly forgretting its function.
I gaze through the world from behind blinded eyes
And wonder what I did to deserve this.
Copyright ©
deadly_blaZe
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2003-06-10 08:05:00]
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Re: No Title
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:34:51 PM AEST
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Very good you hold a moment for us and capture it completely very clear and concise. Thnx for sharing.
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:20:49 PM AEST
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| ah...very good...sad... |
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Re: No Title
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:30:11 PM AEST
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you have much talent, this was a very strong write, would like to read more so please hang in there
Shari |
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by obsidian_angel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 05:29:22 AM AEST
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talk about capturing the moment down to a tee, this is a really good, powerful write.
thanx for sharing it with us. |
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