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I'd like to introduce you to me
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
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My name is Lisa Marie Taylor
Yea, my mom was an Elvis fan
I don’t live in reality much
I have my own fantasy land.
I see more evil than I do good
More darkness than I do light
I don’t like daytime very well
I fit in better at night
I’m not a good church-going girl
But I’m not in a Satanist cult.
I am no longer a child
But I’m not yet an adult.
I am not a demon from hell
But I’m not a saint.
My light don’t shine brighter than anyone else’s
But it is not extraordinarily faint.
I am sometimes very confused
I have 50 different answers to every question.
I will not accept help from anyone
I get angry at every suggestion.
I have many scars all over my legs
And some on my arms too.
They’re scars I wish I didn’t have
I wish I could undo.
For I sometimes take knives to my skin
I can account for every scar.
And one day after many more cuts
My body will match my heart.
I am often haunted
By flashbacks and memories
Sometimes I see people that aren’t there
People from my past that I don’t want to see.
Sometimes I think I’m screwed up in the head
I think I’m beyond repair.
I am not happy most of the time
For some reason I’m lost in despair.
My brother’s suicidal, a druggie, and depressed
My sister’s a drunk and a whore
I don’t wanna take the same path that they did
But this key in my hand seems to only fit that door.
I am known by myself
For sitting in dark corners to cry
I am known by everyone else
For being tough-never letting a tear escape my eye.
I am the shadow growing
In the corner of your eye
I am the shiver of fear
That runs the length of your spine
I don’t have much feeling left
In fact I’ve pretty much died.
So you think I’m a little sick in the head
Look around, people like me aren’t hard to find
Perhaps you should look inside yourself
For I’m the dark side of your mind.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
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2003-06-10 03:25:00]
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Re: I'd like to introduce you to me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 07:22:09 AM AEST
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The quality of poetry on this site just seems to get better and better and this poem is no exception. It is absolutely incredible. I look forward to reading more.
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Re: I'd like to introduce you to me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:46:34 AM AEST
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all I can say is WOW!! Very honest write. Keep them coming.
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 02:28:50 PM AEST
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Ah, Lisa, this is v strong, a really good write..
I love the last two lines..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: I'd like to introduce you to me
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by GregoryGreen04 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 07:46:54 PM AEST
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| Great write! I'm impressed with many of the metaphors. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: I'd like to introduce you to me
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 11:13:26 PM AEST
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bro and sis are like that aren't they? hmmmm...i like to forget sometimes i guess...another great write lis. love ya!
your twin,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: I'd like to introduce you to me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 04:49:48 AM AEST
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Ooh this creeped me out... very well done! I applaud you for this, for the honesty and for the talent. I'm not one to deny my own dark side, so I can really appreciate this.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I'd like to introduce you to me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:56:58 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Lisa...It's a pleasure to meet you. This poem is incredible... Must have taken a lot of courage to write...such pure honesty is welcomed anytime.... I hope your life gets better....You are very talented..
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