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I Dare You
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I dare you to look into my eyes, I dare you to let me inside,
Open your heart, accept this man that has been torn apart,
Give in to your desire, we can make love by the fire,
Body to body, souls in harmony,
I dare you to say no, I dare you to ignor these feeling I show,
Act like you don't care, as I run my fingers through your hair,
Hold me tight, there will be no sleeping tonight,
Two heartbeats combind in one, and won't stop until the rise of the sun,
I dare you to give in, I dare you to accept this love I send,
Close your eyes, let the pain of the world pass you by,
Let yourself go, love strong enough to shake your soul,
Candle light, the mood is right,
I dare you to cry, I dare you to let your heart fly,
Take a deep breathe, lying there just chest to chest,
Your the only thing on my mind, let our bodies intertwine,
Rose petals upon the bed, allow our love to be fed,
I dare you to try, I dare you to deny the urge inside,
Step by step we rekindle our love, taking it all until we get enough,
It's been over a year, go ahead and cry those passionate tears,
Thank you to the man above, I dare you to once again fall in love.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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Re: I Dare You
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:00:21 AM AEST
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| Dare, dare, dare, very well done..venkat |
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Re: I Dare You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:02:55 AM AEST
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MMmmmm "Love is in the air"...... (wish I could sing)
C'mon Matt...bring on those mushy love poems..let's see the softer side of the Phantom.. I loved this... Lovely poem...
Hugs from your island friend...
Jenni |
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Re: I Dare You
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:19:19 AM AEST
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excellent
Shari |
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Re: I Dare You
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:32:00 AM AEST
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| Wow ... fantastic write... I hadn't thought about the difficulties you both might face with being apart for so long ... this poem expresses those emotions so well. Enjoy every moment ... Jan |
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Re: I Dare You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:40:23 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem,Its got to be so hard for you both being away so long,I couldnt do it!
Great write! Christina |
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Re: I Dare You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 02:59:55 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
great poem, hope you two see each other again. wish you the best !
CZ
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Re: I Dare You
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by obsidian_angel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 05:34:03 AM AEST
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this poem almost made me cry. its so beautiful, so filled with emotion. great write!
thanx. |
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Re: I Dare You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 04:34:36 PM AEST
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| i dare u 2 ignore these feelings i show~!!!really too much passionative and quite daring poetry that is...very well hope this writer keeps on and on in his daring to write such imperious poems salam fi aman allah! |
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Re: I Dare You
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:07:25 AM AEST
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This is simply beautiful. I absolutely love it.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: I Dare You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 12:03:52 PM AEST
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| I will take your dare if you really want someone to love you. I don't know you but the name of this poem caught my eye and I had to read it. You seem like such a beautiful and loving soul and I could fall in love with a man like you. Please respond to my comment and I will give you my e-mail address and we can get to know each other better. Maybe something can come of it. Who knows???? Your secret admirer Sheila |
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Re: I Dare You
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by PhantomsLDY on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 11:38:55 PM AEST
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| Well, Sheila first of all you are right that my husband is a beautiful soul which is one reason I love him so much and him being faithful is another. I seriously doubt that he will be responding to your comment so that you will give him your e-mail address. I am glad that you enjoy his poetry as he is a wonderful poet. So enjoy his poetry but I would ask that you keep your amorous comments to yourself. Thank You!!!! |
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Re: I Dare You
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:03:39 PM AEST
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I read this in archives...masterpiece I loved it your such a great poet you are an inspiration
theresa |
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