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I Vow.....
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
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Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
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I vow to be the man
You’ve always wanted and more,
I vow to never leave you
Or go walking out the door.
I vow to you a love
That’s honest, sincere and true
I vow never to cheat
To always be faithful to you.
I vow never to cause you pain
Or lie about how I feel
I vow to always show my love
So you can feel it’s real
I vow to make you happy
In every way I can
I vow to be a loving father
And to be that special man
I vow to be the one
To wipe away your tears
To show you the kind of love
That lasts a million years
I vow to try and understand
All you say and do
I vow to be supportive
Whenever you need me to
I vow to give you the things
A woman needs from her man
I vow to make you feel safe and secure
The best way I possibly can
I vow these things to you my “Angel”
You and only you
I vow to give you a love
That forever will be true!
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Re: I Vow.....
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 10:47:30 AM AEST
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Great write. There is a lucky woman somewhere when you find her!! You will find her. There needs to be more real men in this world today!!
Michelle |
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Re: I Vow.....
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by XoIrishXo on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:13:24 AM AEST
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| Wow....I sure wish there were more guys like YOU out there!! Fantastic write!! XoXo |
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:03:56 PM AEST
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Love the peom, If you are honest and vow to all these things then guess what,
you found your GIRL!!! LOL
I hope you find a great girl that will acknowledge you!!
best wishes,
crazy
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Re: I Vow.....
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 04:00:48 PM AEST
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Wow... if's that not what love should be, I don't know what is. Lucky girl.......
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:46:25 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful, you will find the write woman and when you do, make sure you never let her go! a fantastic write
Your Friend
- Becca |
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:29:12 PM AEST
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Michelle,
Thank you for your comment!! Perhaps one day I'll find my Mrs. Right, maybe. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:32:40 PM AEST
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Becca,
Thank you for the comment!! And when/if I do ever find her, I most definately won't let her go!!
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:38:02 PM AEST
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Moonlit,
Do any of us ever really know what real love is or what it should be?? I'd like to think I have a good idea...but I'm not so sure. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!!! Thank you for your comment!
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:42:54 PM AEST
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Crazy,
I'm glad you loved the poem!! I most certainly am honest and I would definately vow those things and more to the right woman...lol, you don't want me sweetheart, I'm afraid you'd have caught me on the "re-bound", I'm damaged goods these days. Maybe one day I'll find a "great girl/woman", if one exists.
Thank you for your sweet comment!
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:45:23 PM AEST
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Thank you for the comment!! Trust me, there are a few guys like me out there, we are just few and far between....don't look hard, he'll appear out of the blue I'm sure! I'm glad you liked my poem!
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:10:01 PM AEST
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Feb 8th next year will be our 50th wedding anniversary. We vowed, all those years ago,
and so far so good.
Vows are easy to make but difficult to keep.
but I'm sure from this poem you will make it too |
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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Wrybod,
Congrats on your upcoming 50th wedding anniversary!!! Yes, they are very easy to make, but some people have a hard time keeping them. Thank you for your comment!
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by stargazer on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 09:12:32 PM AEST
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WOW... if that is not love, than love does not exist. There is a true love out there somewhere. And if there were more men like you- then this world would be an amazing place. You are defiantly one of a kind.
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 05:12:43 PM AEST
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Amy-
Thank you for the sweet comments!!! But, if I am "one of a kind", why A) am I on my second failed marriage and B) why does REAL LOVE evade me so?
Christopher
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:00:38 AM AEST
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Absolutely and positively beautiful and sincere.... Great words... I seem to have missed some very good work from you...
Welcome to ypdc..... Nice to have another romantic heart on board!!
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Re: I Vow.....
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 09:13:40 AM AEST
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Jenni,
Thank you for the comment!!! Thank you for welcoming me to ypdc, I have only started submitting my poetry now for about a week, I'm glad you enjoy them!!! Yes, I am a bit of a romantic, but I think we all are to a sense.
Christopher
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