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An Angel II
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
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Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I couldn’t believe my eyes
As she glided through my door
She put her hand to my cheek
Wiping the tears away once more.
“These are tears of joy”, she said
“I know this to be true.
I’ve been patiently waiting above,
To finally come to you!”
“I’ve watched you grow from a boy,
To become the man you are today,
I’ve seen the mistakes you’ve made,
And all your hurt along the way.”
“I have waited for this moment,
And for the time to be just right,
When our hearts could be as one,
And together we’d take flight.”
“So take my heart and hold it close,
I promise to never let you down,
No more will you wear another tear,
Or that sad and lonesome frown.”
“For today I’ve fallen from above,
Just to be with you,
Look into my eyes my darlin’,
I’m in love with an Angel too!”
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Goebelclm73
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Re: An Angel II
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:43:33 AM AEST
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| Both poems were just beautiful,I just love the angels! Great write! Christina |
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Re: An Angel II
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:06:39 PM AEST
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love it, you've got a talent!
your poems are great,
crazy
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Re: An Angel II
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:52:17 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem from the master, keep up the good work, i will be looking for more!
Your Friend
- Becca |
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Re: An Angel II
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:52:21 PM AEST
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Christina,
Thank you for the comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed them so much!!
Christopher
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Re: An Angel II
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:54:24 PM AEST
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Crazy,
Thank you for your sweet comments, I'm glad you liked them so much!!
Christopher
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Re: An Angel II
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:57:03 PM AEST
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Becca,
I'm hardly a master hun, but I will continue to try and write. Thank you for your comments!!
Christopher
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