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An Angel
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Walking along a winding road
My feet are heavy from my load
The sky is black, showing no light
Then out of the blue, a shine so bright
I turned my head the light's too much
Then on my hands I felt a touch
And on my ear I could feel a breath
My body shook, as I'm scared to death
I hear a voice, it calls to me
As I turn around, who could it be?
There she was, just standing there
I saw her beauty, beyond compare
She said my name, how does she know?
And how does her face, get that glow?
Her eyes sparkle, as she smiles at me
But she is an Angel, how could this be?
She takes my hand, we start to walk
I have no words, as I try to talk
This moment is one I've held deep inside
Is this the woman to be my bride?
So many questions are filling my head
Silently I ask, "Am I dead?"
Then we stop, and she says me
"I'm the one, he created for thee"
My eyes swell up, tears began to fall
And with her hand she wipes them all
She says, "This is a love without an end
I'll always be there, forever your friend"
"You have my heart, it's honest and true
I'll always love and cherish you
But now you must go, and soon you will see
An Angel before you, and she will be me."
The sound of a clock woke me from this dream
It was all so real, or so it did seem
I began to cry, then a knock at the door
I opened it quickly and heard, "Cry no more!"
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Goebelclm73
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2003-06-09 04:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by XoIrishXo on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:16:16 AM AEST (User
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You are a very gifted writer ,my friend...I truly hope your dreams come true!! ;) Smile! XoXo |
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST (User
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Keep on dreaming anythings possible! Loved this! Christina |
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:09:46 PM AEST (User
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I hope you find this girl that you are looking for, I hope your dreams come true. I'm sure you'll make any girl happy!
hugs,
crazy |
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:50:27 PM AEST (User
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Wow, another truely beautiful poem, you will find her, and she will be lucky to have a man as sincere and as talented as you
Your Friend
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:01:15 PM AEST (User
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THANK YOU!! I can only hope that my dreams come true as well, but reality is quite a bit different than that of a dream, and much more painful. I'm glad you liked the poem!
Christopher
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:04:00 PM AEST (User
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Christina,
Yes, I suppose anything is possible. I'm glad you liked the poem! Thank you for your comment!
Christopher
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:06:26 PM AEST (User
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Crazy,
I hope I find her one day too, believe me, I'm tired of going through a lot of Ms Wrong's!! One day I'm sure I can make the right one happy. Thank you for your comments!!
Christopher
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Re: An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:08:36 PM AEST (User
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Miss Becca, you are spoiling me! Thank you for the comments, you are way too sweet!!
Christopher
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