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This is my Quest for You
Contributed by
venkat
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Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is my quest for you, this is my song for you!
Where can I find you, when can I meet you!
My heart sings your songs
My mind shouts your thoughts
This separation tears my hearts pain
This silence swells my hell’s pain!!
I know not if the time beacons a lamp to
Show my path in the darkness of my night!
Even though I hid you in my eyes
And whispered in my imagination
Even though I saw you so long in my dreams
I could not hold you in my arms
I could not hug you to my heart
This separation tears my hearts pain
This silence swells my hell’s pain!!
The pain of separation never seems to cease
When a branch of jasmine moves in the air
When a rustle of willow sounds in my ear
When the breeze of coolness touches my skin
I feel your nearness but I can’t see your face
I feel your nearness but I can’t see your face
Without you before me nothing can I do
Without you before me darkness I see
Hence rush up to me dear as dawn of my new day!
This separation tears my passion
This silence swells my hell’s pain!!
Except you no one is my refuge,
Believe me darling! O my love!
My heart is shriveling! My voice is drowning!
If you’re not here I will be no more,
Come for me O dear! Come for me O love!
My hopes singed, my life tree became leafless
As a fresh rain to bring spring of life come to me
This separation tears my hearts pain
This silence swells my hell’s pain!!
This is my quest for you, this is my song for you!
Where can I find you, when can I meet you!
8-6-2003
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 07:46:45 PM AEST
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lovely
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 08:39:05 PM AEST
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Very well done my friend, I felt every word, I really enjoyed this one of yours.
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 09:18:40 PM AEST
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this pulls my heart strings. Beautiful.
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 10:03:20 PM AEST
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| Your poem holds deep meaning for me...it's as if you took the words of my heart and put them into print. The longing..the need for one who is present only in the heart. Very well done venkat. Larry |
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 10:49:01 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem well done!
So much meaning & feeling into this! Christina |
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 11:04:02 PM AEST
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Excellent write...I have to agree with Larry..
Jenni |
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:00:45 AM AEST
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| Wow... so much passion in this poem ... it is breathtaking in its heartfelt cry. Your best poem I think, venkat .... wonderful... sincerely Jan |
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:16:16 AM AEST
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This is lovely. I really enjoyed reading it. It is beautiful.
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:55:03 AM AEST
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Ven' Oh the yearning........but it has such joy for me ...yes joy........since it makes me more aware of the one who has been by my side for 50 years now.
This was perhaps the best you've done so you say.
If I may borrow an old quotation I would say
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:24:08 AM AEST
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| Wow, my friend .. for joy only I have writen this.. seeing your comment..i feel this a good peace..when I read this my wife, my daughter son daughter-in-law all were overjoyed in my home..venkat |
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Re: This is my Quest for You
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:33:02 PM AEST
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| awww very sweet and so heartfelt, very special poem indeed my friend, i love it:) hugs n' love nessa |
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