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Untiltled
Contributed by
PhantomsBBYgrl
on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hes Phantom and shes Raven
He hids in the dark
And she flys in the night
They are two different things
But yet alike
Their calls of lonliness calls from inside
Yet different but deeply in love
Their calls of loniness bring them closer togerther
So far from each other but they are used to the pain
from being lonley for so long they
Hardly know where they belong
They have found each other that is all there is
to be said so for now I bid fairwell
Copyright ©
PhantomsBBYgrl
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2003-06-08 15:05:00]
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Re: Untiltled
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:21:27 PM AEST
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lovely write
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Re: Untiltled
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:27:02 PM AEST
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Oh Kim, this is soooo beautiful..and very touching.... I'm sure your Mom and Dad will treasure it always.... I am so happy for them.
Hugs,
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Re: Untiltled
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 07:47:41 PM AEST
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| awww how sweet, i know they will love this beautiful poem, its neat how you described them too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Untiltled
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 07:52:48 PM AEST
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Thank you Sweetheart, me and your mom love you very much, and if me coming home helpped you to write agan, I'll do a thousand times more, you write so beauitifully, and so full of emotion. Thank you Kim, I love you.
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Re: Untiltled
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 10:53:53 PM AEST
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AAHH I'm choked! So much love there!
Great one! Christina |
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Re: Untiltled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 09:20:52 AM AEST
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I love it when families reunite!! It is such a happy time. Great poem. Almost made me cry!!
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Re: Untiltled
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 08:09:55 PM AEST
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| Took me right back to my father who was a merchant seaman and my mother who cried every time he went away |
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Re: Untiltled
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by boricuacd on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:31:46 AM AEST
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I enjoy your writing very much kim. Keep it up. You are extremely talented and creative.
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