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Enough
Contributed by
broken
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Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
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im trapped in this denial
lost in suicidal thoughts
these reoccuring images
got me all distraught
these chills going down my spine
ran beside me home
maybe if i wish enough
i wont wake up alone.
this melody inside my head
repeats itself nonstop
a broken record playing on
crawling as i walk.
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2003-06-08 03:05:00]
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Re: Enough
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 12:06:12 PM AEST
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aah, lovely. your rhythm is wonderful. loved the first stanza.
x_x_x |
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Re: Enough
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 01:44:33 PM AEST
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Awesome write nikki! welcome to ypdc. i love your poetry...you're gonna say that this sounds cheesey or something...but you really do have a gift for writing.
Always,
~*riki*~ |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 01:49:57 PM AEST
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| thanx. i didnt even know what i wrote until the next door..weird eh... |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 01:57:33 PM AEST
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| i didnt ***** mean 2 put that. sorry...2 much rocking last night. haha. i meant next day. jesus... |
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Re: Enough
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by MX on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 05:16:53 PM AEST
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im trapped in this denial
lost in suicidal thoughts
these reoccuring images
got me all distraught
~loved that stanza. a lot. really good. i can relate. |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:06:33 AM AEST
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| thanx. me 2. dont know whether its a good thing or bad. ehh...we'll go with bad. its shorter 2 type. |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:06:34 AM AEST
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| thanx. me 2. dont know whether its a good thing or bad. ehh...we'll go with bad. its shorter 2 type. |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:11:33 AM AEST
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| yep. youre right. that sounds cheesy or something. thanx...sounds kinda...errr.... wrong for me 2 say that. errr ill just shutup now. love you. |
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Re: Enough
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:44:00 AM AEST
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a sparkle of authenticity
once aware of the trappings of denial
all you need to focus on is
"wishing more than enough"
then you won't wake up alone.
(you already know the answer-
all you have to do is act it out) |
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Re: Enough
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:07:59 PM AEST
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a sparkle of authenticity
once aware of the trappings of denial
all you need to focus on is
"wishing more than enough"
then you won't wake up alone.
(you already know the answer-
all you have to do is act it out) |
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Re: Enough
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by InteruptedFate on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 04:26:37 PM AEST
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| i love this. please right more. |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 08:08:03 PM AEST
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| yes. very true. just 2 dark to see. 3> |
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Re: Enough
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by broken on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 08:08:49 PM AEST
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| thankyou. i have & will. 3> |
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Re: Enough
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by SwEeT_aLeX on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:12:16 PM AEST
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| I realli like this poem...the first and second parts are the best...keep writing.. |
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