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Catharsis
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Discontent, disrespected, distant
Unmotivated by the very things I fear
Looking for any means of catharsis
Whatever the cost
Whatever the outlet
Whether good or bad
Weeping on a pendulum of depressed emotions
Rocking back and forth on this uncertain sea
Saddened, yet pressing onward
For a smile or word of gratitude
From the multitudes of zombie-like peers
Chanting the analogous consumer slogan
(Brainwashed)
Dreary oh the drudgery every depressed meter
Met with the gazes of the pedophiliac masses
Within the codge of this revolving earth
Spinning toward its ultimate destruction
From whatever pointless religion or philosophy
You cling to or adhere to,
To satisfy your maimed heart
My eyes are a gaping wound
Screaming all that I am incapable of
Slapping to the ground the tears descend
Or threaten to at my own thoughtless indescretion
Nauseated by scenes of exuberance,
Yet weary of my mouth set in a grim line
Catharsis, the word rolls over my tongue like honey
Slitting that crucial vein
Or swallowing mountains of pills
Those concepts make me quiver dreamily
Catharsis, I must do something to allay these fears
I can't fight anymore on my lonesome
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-06-08 02:05:00]
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Re: Catharsis
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 12:17:10 PM AEST
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this is incredible! I whispered this out loud to myself - and, wow!
beautiful, and hey, keep getting drunk if it helps you write like this, lol : )
charlotte x_x_x
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Re: Catharsis
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 05:06:22 PM AEST
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Wow, very good, your imagination is amazing and very powerful. excellent job,
-kelly |
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Re: Catharsis
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by bopeep on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 05:34:47 PM AEST
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| You were right... this IS one of the best poems you've ever written. Its wicked dude. The way it all rolls out of tounge...its awesome. it's strange how we write better when we're manic and drunk. lol. |
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