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Fool
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
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I am a fool
I was a fool
Feeling the blood trickle down
Waiting for the bliss to settle in
A captive to this addiction
A slave to its perverse ways
I've tried to fight
Tried to hold on,
But my grip is slipping
With each aching gasp
Fought so long so hard
With no replenishment
Every gift torn away
Until I'm left with nothingness
Betting how many kleenexes
I'll need to clean up my mess
I'm sorry I really am
I need to let go,
I need to let go
The pull is to strong
I'm holding on to nothing
I'm falling, I'm falling
I thought I'd be smiling,
But like always I'm close to tears
I am a fool
I'll always be a fool
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-06-08 01:05:00]
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Re: Fool
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 12:21:30 PM AEST
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beautiful..
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Re: Fool
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by starshine on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:13:41 PM AEST
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| Hi- Your poem is sadly well done. The inner turmoil you describe can either be from your heart or your head- if it's from your heart, it's amazing how poetry is better than a shrink and if it's from your head- your wording is imaginative and deep. |
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Re: Fool
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by Saira on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 06:19:03 PM AEST
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| Thats a lovely write! Keep it up! |
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Re: Fool
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 05:13:11 PM AEST
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I can relate well.
Very nice, especially the last seveb lines. Things will get better for you, I promise..
-kelly |
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Re: Fool
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:30:43 AM AEST
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| wow...i'm left speechless again, i really hope everything is ok with you. you describe your emotions well. i promise u, evreything will settle down and you will get thru your turmoil. dont give up |
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