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the world war 1
Contributed by
fluffy
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Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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The western front,
Was quiet,
Until they heard a creaking noise in front,
It started getting louder,
As they started getting closer,
They started running forward,
And they stopped when they were tired,
As it started with a shot,
Thats when the war started
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Re: the world war 1
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 04:17:22 PM AEST
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Hello, Fluffy, Your teacher is right. The poem has something meaningful to say.
Good work. Bizzy |
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Re: the world war 1
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by Lele on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:52:14 PM AEST
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Every War begins with an stupid mind.
Good poem for a sorrow's action. |
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