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under the moon
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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watching you drive away
makes me oh so sad
i don’t know why i feel this way
i’m hurting oh so bad
close our eyes and snuggle
and everything’s alright
wake up to our puddle
and prepare for the daily fight
the sad part of this lovely mess
is it’s not you or i
that disturbs our happy nest
it’s for others that we cry
what, pray tell, can we do
to save this sinking ship
how can we stay in love and true
~from our shoulders knock this chip?
answers i have not today
but wish they would come soon
all i wish for is my love
nestled under the moon…
june 5, 2003
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2003-06-07 20:35:00]
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Re: under the moon
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:51:10 PM AEST
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it is so hard when there are others involved I will keep you in my prayers
Shari |
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Re: under the moon
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 09:03:18 PM AEST
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| poetically this poem is beautiful, realistically speaking, my heart goes out to you, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: under the moon
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 10:28:15 PM AEST
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Michele this is so touching. I hope you find the peace and happiness you so deserve. Im here for you!!
Michelle |
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Re: under the moon
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 10:32:53 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poetry ... such a sad situation ... I hope writing about it helps a little ... hugs Jan |
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Re: under the moon
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 01:30:53 AM AEST
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Lady, this is beautifully sad... do hope the situation gets better soon...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: under the moon
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 11:18:16 PM AEST
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A beautifully sad write!
So much feeling into this! Christina |
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