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Teardrops
Contributed by
empois
on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I lie in bed.
I want to die.
Teardrops falling from my eyes.
There's no escape.
There is no end.
No where to go
but round the bend.
I sit in bed
Still want to die
Wipe the teardrops from my eyes
It's time to go
Put on a face
Take my body
from this place
I'm scared to live
I'm scared to die
No teardrops falling from my eyes
They fall within
A continuous stream
No one knows
How I've been
Lying in bed
Wanting to die
No teardrops to wipe from my eyes
No outward signs
Of inner shame
I need consoling all the same.
Copyright ©
empois
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2003-06-07 16:35:00]
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Re: Teardrops
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 05:06:45 PM AEST
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wow, this is so good, it pulled at my heart and took me back to my own struggles with depression....Great write, i really loved this!
Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Teardrops
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 05:29:27 PM AEST
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yeah, i know where you're coming from too - good poem.
really liked the lines:
I'm scared to live
I'm scared to die
No teardrops falling from my eyes
They fall within
A continuous stream
Keep writing it out x_x_x |
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Re: Teardrops
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 05:57:52 PM AEST
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very well written
Shari |
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Re: Teardrops
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:31:45 PM AEST
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| such a heartfelt poem, but yet as sad as it is, it is yet beautiful! |
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Re: Teardrops
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by kittiekat on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 01:31:51 AM AEST
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| aww.....this poem is soo sad...makes me want to cry...! waa....!! waa. Hope you dont stay sad or depressed like that for long. Remember to stay happy and live your life. wipes those tears and be happy..! hehehehe. see ya around, byeee....! >^..^< |
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