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Outdo My Inner Hatred
Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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Hate me
Just do it
Hate me
Forever
(I understand)
There are times
When I hate myself
More than you do
(If that’s possible)
I could say im sorry
For the rest
Of my life
(And then some)
But it still wouldn’t matter
And you still wouldn’t care
(I beg for forgiveness)
I cant take back what I did
And somehow alter my past
(No matter how much I want to)
But Ive learned
From my mistakes
And im making better choices
(Why can’t u see that)
Copyright ©
deadly_blaZe
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2003-06-07 13:35:00]
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Re: Outdo My Inner Hatred
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:07:47 PM AEST
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well written..I hope whoever you wrote this for finds a way to forgive for thier sake as well as yours..for to hold resentment eats away at the inside of a person
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Re: Outdo My Inner Hatred
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:00:21 PM AEST
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I really like this, it reminds me of myself. I hope you find what you need.
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Re: Outdo My Inner Hatred
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 09:01:45 PM AEST
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True hard hitting and not to long short and powerful... sometimes no matter how hard u try u can't plz ppl. There not worth time. Look forward to more of yer stuff.
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