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He Took the World with Him
Contributed by
MX
on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Photographs and letters spread across the floor.
She’s listening to his voice ringing in her head,
She can’t listen anymore.
Retracing every word he ever said.
How could this be the end?
She promised him.
And now she’s lost another friend.
These excuses are getting old,
Her stories are all said and done.
Her lies begin to unfold.
They kill him slowly, one by one.
This hurts more then she wants it too.
He won’t ever realize how much she cared.
Did he want to listen?
He was her world; he was always there.
Tears roll down her cheek as her insides scream how much she misses him.
Didn’t he notice she’s gone?
He will never know he was her world.
She will never tell.
She could never tell him even though she should.
In the end they both sit together, in hell.
She prays for this suicide.
As the pictures come down,
Let her cry.
Let her comfort be the ground.
Alone at last.
Is he happy?
Only in the past.
Only for the things she could never be.
Fold the letters.
Pack away the pictures.
They’ll both get better,
Observing the wounds and healing each other’s.
Best friends forever.
Copyright ©
MX
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2003-06-07 12:05:00]
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Re: He Took the World with Him
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by norm on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST
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I really must say, your words are great
but the song that they sing
kinda makes me hate,
the fact you are young
for you are, don't you see
i know for sure that young you be..
nobody as old as me would care
to lose a love is savoire faire...
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Re: He Took the World with Him
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 07:37:30 PM AEST
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This is so sad but so gorgeous... I hope things get better for you. Losing your best friend is the most painful feeling in the world.
~ Moonlit |
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