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what i see
Contributed by
dantoad
on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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what i see
is fireflies and the light in your eyes
i can see
the way you look at me it makes me believe
i can see
that the night is cool and i feel free
you make me see
and i can tell
that when you come around
i leave my hell
and i know now
that we're in love
and now i see
you're the only one for me
you can't see my way though
it makes me cry
that everything i know
could be a lie
you can't see the sun
when its behind the trees
you don't feel the warmth
of the falling leaves
you'll never touch me
and feel the same
because this love
was just a game
used like a toy, i played my part
until it was over
as soon as its start
you tell me its nothing to fear
nothin is up and nothings wrong
and every time i hear our song
i see us laughin, see us glad,
see you with her, and see me sad.
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2003-06-07 08:35:00]
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Re: what i see
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:15:22 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so beautiful... |
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Re: what i see
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 07:24:57 PM AEST
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Oh that's so beautifully sad... wonderfully written.
~ Moonlit |
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