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Love # 1
Contributed by
cutey
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Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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Love is like a mountain stream flowing evenly
It can be so so peaceful and really calm
flowing down to the mountain to the sea
one minute it is calm the next raging bad
marriage is the same way as a mountain stream
it can be so peaceful and so wonderfully calm
but one or both can over flow the banks of love
it takes both people to work on a relationship
you both need love respect understanding honesty
with out all them what you have a raging brook
it is so easy to say i love you and i do take thee
any one can say that to another thats the easy part
but it takes real men and real women to truly mean it
the hard part is trying to fine a real man or real women
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cutey
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2003-06-06 14:05:00]
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Re: Love # 1
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 03:00:13 PM AEST
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| True and verynice imagery |
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Re: Love # 1
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:08:26 AM AEST
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this poem is really nice and to the point thank you
Martese |
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Re: Love # 1
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM AEST
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| true...true....true. |
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