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Plastic Flowers

Contributed by ravenblack_phoenix on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Plastic flowers,
Pasty skin,
Artificial love,
A taste of sin,
I can see through you,
This life you live,
I bet fire will melt you,
Now what do you have to give?

Your existence is fake,
Your eyes are phony,
All you do is take,
Everyone should think you’re honey.
Well guess what -
I can see through you,
And this life that you live,
If I bend you enough I bet I could break you,
Now what do you have to give?

Your heart is empty,
Your synthetic blood is cold,
That plastic skin looks hefty,
And this game you play is getting old.

Everyone can see through you,
This so-called life you live,
If we leave you out to dry too long, I bet you’d crack,
And now what do you have to give?
Lies, misconceptions,
Falsified love...
Broken hearts and friendships, that’s all you’ve done.
Your existence is the epitome of fake,
Your eyes are manufactured,
All you do is take,
And now you can see that your plan is fractured.

I can see through you,
I can see you -
You and your plastic flowers...
Your pasty skin...
Your artificial love...
I can see you... Your personal sin...




Copyright © ravenblack_phoenix ... [ 2003-06-06 13:05:00]
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Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by DOCTERKRISITN on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 01:46:33 PM AEST
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i really l this it straight to the point and you are truthfull and honest in this
kristin


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 03:31:29 PM AEST
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a hardhitting good write
Shari


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:10:40 PM AEST
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this is so, so good...i love it...


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:47:46 PM AEST
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great write! if you don't think this one is one of your better ones then i'm off to read more!
~*Riki*~


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:32:23 AM AEST
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Great write! I think it's wonderful.

~ Moonlit


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by Ivy on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:34:47 PM AEST
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A very straightforward write. I liked it, it is true. Few people are like that. Ivy


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST
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I love your honesty and straight forward nature in this poem. We are much alike in this aspect. I agree with you. Going through something right now that this poem fits to a tee!! BRAVO!!
Michelle


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:41:01 AM AEST
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I think tis is a great poem it gets right to the point of telling people what they are great write


Re: Plastic Flowers (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:41:23 AM AEST
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I think this is a great poem it gets right to the point of telling people what they are great write




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