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No Escaping
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Crimson tear drop,
Pure as silk,
Soft and sudden,
Rich as milk.
Falling slowly,
Slipping downward,
A scorned soul’s essence -
Slightly soured.
Touched by pain,
Caught by sadness,
Seeped within -
Engulfed in madness.
Drowned in guilt,
Tainted by hate,
Trapped in a place
Which has no gates.
Sinking slowly,
Gradually slipping,
Within a deep darkness...
There is no escaping.
Copyright ©
ravenblack_phoenix
... [
2003-06-06 12:05:00]
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Re: No Escaping
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:13:37 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is really terriffic!! I love the way it flows. Great work!!
sleepless_siren |
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Re: No Escaping
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by M on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:15:43 PM AEST
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| This is amazing, well done |
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Re: No Escaping
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by Saira on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 03:13:00 PM AEST
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| what a beautiful write...so heart touching. Loved it! |
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Re: No Escaping
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:28:33 AM AEST
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I really like the third stanza! Well done!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: No Escaping
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by MX on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 05:14:57 PM AEST
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| 'licks lips'...yummy...i liked it a lot. |
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