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final
Contributed by
steved
on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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blood in her veins starts to freeze
coldasice
coldasice
the sadness makes my nosebleed
she's life and unlife
truth and untruth
wise and unwise
greif-stricken shivering
i throw a handful of grit
in her eyes
in her eyes
in her ears
she's sno blind now
and she cannot hear
the sno-flakes falling on her grave
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steved
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2003-06-06 10:35:00]
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Re: final
(User Rating: 1 )
by XoIrishXo on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 10:57:00 AM AEST
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| Wow....this one actually gave me the shivers!! I am truly sorry for your loss! XoXo |
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Re: final
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by blain on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:56:10 AM AEST
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| eep. definitely majorly evocative |
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Re: final
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:18:00 AM AEST
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Eerie. Good stuff.
~ Moonlit |
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