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Up Again
Contributed by
faffeee
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Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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up again
this night, my friend
the day
can’t ever seem to end
no where to go
and nothing to do
but just sit here
and think of you
cups of tea
tumbling papers
for now no cigarettes
they’re saved for later
i closed the curtains
but changed my mind
i like to see
the pale dawn light
i watch all night
with all-seeing eyes
occasionally
people walk by
but mainly I stare
wishing someone would be there
outside my window
stays cold and bare
dark purple rings
surround my eyes
growing every night
i live this life
after midnight
i enjoy the peace
such tranquillity
no harassment or grief
but the silence
is a constant reminder
i'm alone
i'm afraid
and for this little girl
there’s no-one to find her
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faffeee
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2003-06-06 09:05:00]
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Re: Up Again
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 09:22:53 AM AEST
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this is a great write but sad and lonely also.Well done.
Michelle |
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Re: Up Again
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by norm on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 10:05:50 AM AEST
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there are many night
i have these fights,
but not to go mad,
i make poetry..bad
I hope my poems wind up as good as yours
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Re: Up Again
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 10:39:54 AM AEST
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| insomnia breeds inspiration i think...i like the rhythm of this, it seems to reflect a longing and suggests that this isn't just about sleepless nights but also a craving for something more. perhaps read my poem 'Sleepless Circles', it runs along similar lines. great write, Kate x |
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Re: Up Again
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by XoIrishXo on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:00:13 AM AEST
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| This one definitely rings true...I can empathize!! You did an awesome job capturing the lonely feelings...and the thoughts that seem to haunt us most in the midnight hours!! XoXo |
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Re: Up Again
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:31:15 AM AEST
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A brilliant poem, alot of emotion, it captures all the feelings that i can relate to at least, great write!
Your Friend
-Becca |
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