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The Feeling
Contributed by
Kizzikins
on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One day it builds up in the sultry heat.
The feeling outside,it surrounds and engulfs.
It sets itself in for once in my life
now I don't know what to make of it all
The feeling I get when it all crashes down
in my mind, in my head I have bairly nothing
everyone I know, they seem not around
even if they are standing next to me
the evil I cause, with just a few words
or a flash of a light,or a walk through the rain.
The nothingness I own inside my own grasp
I'm nothing to them.I'm part of there game.
The feeling inside,when it all surfaces at once
The hectic ticking,it explodes from within.
The deathly silence when my mind draws a blank .
To go on with my day,to wait until it starts again.
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Kizzikins
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2003-06-06 00:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Feeling
(User Rating: 1 ) by M on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 06:55:43 AM AEST (User
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Very true and a very good poem. |
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