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An Inevitable World
Contributed by
vampy
on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In a world of darkness,
in a world of pain,
in a world of hate,
in a world of suffering:
nothing grows,
nothing sparkles,
nothing shines,
nothing lives.
The sky is black,
the sun nonexistent.
The grass is dead,
the oceans putrid.
No birds sing,
no children play,
no couples hold hands,
no one has fun.
This fictional world
seems to be coming true.
Copyright ©
vampy
... [
2003-06-05 21:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: An Inevitable World
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 09:23:05 PM AEST
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| so true...the world can be a very dark place...Lisa |
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Re: An Inevitable World
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:33:12 AM AEST
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Honest write. hopefully we can all come together and make our world into a fantasy dreamland..Ahhhh wouldn't it be nice!! Great job on this poem.
Michelle |
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Re: An Inevitable World
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 10:40:39 AM AEST
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The only person who has power over your world is you. Make it what you want it to be. Unfortunatel, the world does seem like this sometimes. Great poem.
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Re: An Inevitable World
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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so very true.. good, deep write..
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