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This Day
Contributed by
spaceotter
on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 08:40:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've been waiting for this day.
It's been far too long, to stay-
It's been nice,
Shared some laughs-
But I've been waiting for this day.
I've been waiting for this day.
It's been far too hard of late-
It's been slow,
I don't know...
I've just been waiting for this day.
I've been waiting for this day.
It's been rough to stay away-
The nights are long,
The life's all gone...
I've been waiting for this day.
I've been waiting for this day.
This door's like heaven in a way-
The break was hard,
I'm glad I'm back...
I've been waiting for this day.
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spaceotter
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2002-08-06 20:40:57]
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Re: This Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 02:29:25 AM AEST
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| Ahh... the infamous return home after a good dose of life??? that is how this piece came off to me. Very well written, the verses are like butter, easy to run through. Great job =) |
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Re: This Day
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 07:51:49 AM AEST
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Excellent approach to the subject of death...it flowed very well too.
Chrissie |
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