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A Lie Of It's Own
Contributed by
DespairEmbodied
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Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Now, Don't go saying that
And don't tell me to wake up this morning
I don't know what to feel,
I don't know what to say
Are you through with it all?
Are you going to throw it all away?
What is it that makes it all so wrong?
What makes you want to curl up inside?
I can't find you, lost in your lie.
Would you tell me please,
Where you are?
It seems like you're whispering
It all seems too wierd.
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DespairEmbodied
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2003-06-05 04:05:00]
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Re: A Lie Of It's Own
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 06:50:44 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. I would have liked to see it expanded a bit. It sort of gives a hinto of what you want to say but seems a bit guarded. Very good though.
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Re: A Lie Of It's Own
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 02:17:58 PM AEST
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great write
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Re: A Lie Of It's Own
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by tier on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:33:39 AM AEST
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| i like this poem it tells somewhat of how you feel.....keep writing |
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