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Pass Me By
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
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Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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Pass Me By
I lay quite in the dead of night
I pray the monster will pass me by
I don’t know how much longer I can fight
I pray the monster will pass me by
I pull the covers up to my chin
I pray the monster will pass me by
I look towards the door as fear creeps in
I pray the monster will pass me by
I see the doorknob as it turns
I pray the monster will pass me by
I see the shadow say “it’s your turn”
I pray the monster will pass me by
I run to the closet and lock the door
I pray the monster will pass me by
The door bursts open as I fall to the floor
I pray the monster will pass me by
It picks me up and throws me to the bed
I pray the monster will pass me by
Now I think I’m better off dead
I pray the monster will pass me by
I get up in the morning and I try not to cry
Maybe tonight the monster will pass me by
I pretend every thing is normal as the day goes by
Maybe tonight the monster will pass me by
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Re: Pass Me By
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by BlackFire9786 on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:12:31 PM AEST
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| hey twin~i was the first to read this, ha ha, well i've read it before when i helped u name it but i read it again b/c it's really really good. I LOVE this poem!!! Great job sis! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Pass Me By
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 07:48:56 PM AEST
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very good write
Shari |
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Re: Pass Me By
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by Uncooked on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 07:49:35 PM AEST
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This poem is really catchy, your repeated line just fits in everywhere. Its kind of hard to tell if its written as a nieve child, but somehow I think the childhood fright is symbolic for a persecutor. Amazing good poem, though.
*Kiirsten |
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Re: Pass Me By
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:33:31 PM AEST
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| ya it was cool how you wrote it with the childlike view of it all. its painful to read it almost. you did a really good job. |
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