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Lost Within
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
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Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Lost Within
When I look into the mirror,
I don't know who I see.
I don't recognize the person staring back at me.
I'm a stranger in my own land.
A prisoner of my own war.
It's like a cancer destroying my soul
and I can't find the cure.
No hope left.
I can't run the race.
My minds on overload.
Haunted by my memories
that I'm trying to erase.
Time's going by to fast,
I don't think I can last.
Haunted by my past.
My walls are tumbling down.
Words unspoken,
I can hear so clear.
Profound silence,
ringing in my ears.
Trying so hard.
Trying to win.
Doing everything wrong.
I'm lost within.
I wish pain and suffering were no more.
I wish I could figure out what I'm fighting this war for.
This war within my heart,
within my soul,
within my mind.
Wishing I could leave all of my past behind.
I don't want to be by myself.
I feel like I've got no one else.
Maybe I do.
Maybe I don't.
I guess I'll never truly know.
Trying so hard to hold on.
I'm going to try,
until everything is gone.
I don't know how to begin.
I don't know where to end.
I don't know if I can last much longer
being lost within.
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Re: Lost Within
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by deadly_blaZe on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 07:02:03 AM AEST
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| That was amazing...This reminds me of some of my work...I loved it... I just got a new poster my friend drew for me.. it has a girl in black and white she drew and it says "Lost Within" at the top and "Alone in the Darkness across the bottom"...i loved it.. keep it up |
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Re: Lost Within
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by blain on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 07:19:21 AM AEST
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| this seriously reminds me of my own life... i can totally identify man.. |
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Re: Lost Within
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by BlackFire9786 on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 08:09:30 AM AEST
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| Hey twin! THis was SOOO GOOD! I LOVED IT!! Ur an awesome writer!!! luv ya lotz riki! -Lisa |
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Re: Lost Within
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 02:00:15 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I to have alot of past issues to deal with. Its a hard long road. Keep writing it helps and know in your heart your future will be bright. As time moves on so does the hurt from the past little by little.
Michelle |
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Re: Lost Within
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:09:36 PM AEST
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beautifuly written. Your true desires of pain and wealth are always within. I liked this write, for many of us can really indentify with it and lived it. Wealth in my book means your own personal happiness. I wish you well in finding what it is you so wish to obtain in your own life. I've been there, and slowly have crawled out. Many wonderful folks helped me of course, as well as on- line here too.
keep your writes going, the feelings you put down will reflect in your time, to see much later, how much it meant and helped you along the way too.
AMber Rose :) |
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Re: Lost Within
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 05:21:23 PM AEST
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Hi, I absolutely loved this you took the words right out of my head. Keep writing this was sad but oh so good. Keep up the wonderful work.
Theresa(lovesucks) |
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Re: Lost Within
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 11:41:41 AM AEST
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beautiful...
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