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Unending Sorrows
Contributed by
DeadInside
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Looking for questions unanswered in me, I find nothing but the emptiness that can’t be filled. A piece of me is gone, it’s still held in your tightly clenching fist. Trying so hard to fill that space, but only finding that everything is nothing and nothing is everything. Quick fixes and forbidden loves are only temporary solutions to this unending pain. Just as the sun starts to shine it only rains again. Heavy hearts and broken dreams will never be mended and time only makes the crimson river run deeper. Holding on to this string, the thread is wearing thin. Waiting for this all to end because the sun will never dry up this constant flowing river of broken dreams and never ending sorrows.
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Re: Unending Sorrows
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by TFLM on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:39:02 PM AEST
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| I get a strong sense of grasping for the past in this poem. Whether it is healthy or not it is touchingly human |
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Re: Unending Sorrows
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 02:55:41 AM AEST
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Strong feelings in thsi write. Well done. I hope you find what yur looking for.
Michelle |
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Re: Unending Sorrows
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 02:55:55 AM AEST
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Strong feelings in this write. Well done. I hope you find what yur looking for.
Michelle |
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Re: Unending Sorrows
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 10:26:45 AM AEST
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| Great wright, very emotional poem! keep writing |
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