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Illusion
Contributed by
PhoenixPM
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You turn to me as if to speak
Your skin is pale and cold
The silver moon paints you dead
Along with the darkness that she stole
Deafening silence, the only sound
Your tears quietly caressing your face
I ask you simply, "What is wrong?"
But you just turn away
Stillness startled by the movement
Or maybe it's just me
Dark clouds move over the moon
And it's soon too dark to see
I reach out to grab your hand
But all I find is air
I don't know why I can't touch you
Though I feel like you're still there
Sudden lightning shows the truth
You're in prayer on bended knee
Another flash, I see a tomb
The grave belongs to me
Copyright ©
PhoenixPM
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2003-06-03 22:35:00]
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Re: Illusion
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:08:16 PM AEST
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| i really like this and i think u need to keep writing. |
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Re: Illusion
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by Sandra on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 01:09:34 AM AEST
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| this poem is amazing!! I LOVE it |
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Re: Illusion
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:31:27 AM AEST
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| Somehow I have always liked the dark poetry...and it's a very good one! |
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