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-Oblivious-
Contributed by
gem48
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The grinding stones screech,
The sound echoes through my body
Harmoniously im screaming
Reaching the highest
Sharpening stones the backing orchestra.
Shockwaves extend from the epicentre,
Im quaking
Trembling,
My life lies around me,
Devastation left from the quake.
Yet the choir continue their performance,
The audience unaware.
The end of the rendition is near,
Waiting for the final curtain to drop.
The conclusion of the song,
But the end of the programme?
Copyright ©
gem48
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2003-06-03 14:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: -Oblivious-
(User Rating: 1 ) by dilapidivination on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:33:10 PM AEST (User
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....do we wait for the sign to prompt for applause? And why did the conductor steal my cheese sandwich? |
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Re: -Oblivious-
(User Rating: 1 ) by full_blur on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:45:02 PM AEST (User
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You create a lovely cacophony, that I think is summed up succinctly by "Harmoniously im screaming"
You create a beautifully tortured picture that is back well by your writing style. Cool Stuff. |
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