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Look at me
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I keep getting back up
Only to fall back down
I’m screaming at your feet
But you don’t hear a sound
All the world’s heaven
Is up in the sky
My ending is near
My death is nigh
I can’t keep struggling, fighting
I’m running out of patience
When will you learn
To see past my pretence?
When will you realise
I don't know what to do
I'm crying for someone to hold me
Someone like you
Is it so hard to stop
And look further than you do?
I need someone to care
Someone like you..
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2003-06-03 12:35:00]
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Re: Look at me
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by BlackAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:01:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem, I really like this one. |
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Re: Look at me
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:22:21 PM AEST
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Hey, really great poem.....i know exactly how you feel, it's so frustrating!!! But we must keep trying, never give up! and keep writing! Luv ya lotz-Lisa
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Re: Look at me
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:09:05 PM AEST
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Good poem I can tottaly relate Char. Totally keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Look at me
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 02:18:39 PM AEST
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| You might do better with somebody a bit older than yourself |
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