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Enduring The Storm
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Enduring the Storm
I knew the storm was coming
I could almost smell the rain
I tried to comfort mommy
She was about to cry again
I knew the storms scared her
As much as they did me
She was trying not to cry
I was trying to remember to breath
When daddy walked in the door
The winds started to wail
My mommy trembled even more
And then came the hail
My daddy raised his hand
Then the storm truly began
The thunder rumbled with such force
It shook my mommy and tossed her to the floor
Then the lightning struck
And left a mark on mommy’s cheek.
Fear had griped my throat
And by then I couldn’t even speak
As I tried so hard to scream
Because then the storm came after me
And then the storm came after me.
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Re: Enduring The Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:52:13 PM AEST
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| a very well written poem, but so sad, here's a big hugg and lotsa love, i pray the weather soon improves:) love nessa |
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Re: Enduring The Storm
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:40:34 PM AEST
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| much thanx for the encouragement nessa! love, peace, and chicken grease! storms make rainbows. :-) |
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Re: Enduring The Storm
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:40:18 PM AEST
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I liked this, but so sad I like u used the storm as a reference to an abusive person. Once again a great poem left me stunned.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Enduring The Storm
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST
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| oh this is so amazing...so sad...i'm almost in tears...this is the best of yours i have read, one of the best poems i have ever read...you have a lot of talent, and it shows in this write...beautiful...and as you said, storms make rainbows...keep smiling, love and hugs always...have beautiful days forever, it's people like you that truly deserve them... |
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