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heart wounds
Contributed by
sideshowrunaway
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This unhappiness is me
This cruelty is me
These tears you hear, but you can't see
These tears I cry are me
These hands that shake are mine
This flesh that breaks is mine
The wounds that bleed, the knife that shines
The scars I hide are mine
I'm scared to give to you
What I'm not sure I have
The lies I tell, the hearts I break
Eternal pain that stabs
I feel no need to tear my skin
Your words do that for me
They kiss, they kill, they lacerate
And my heart....I feel it bleed
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Re: heart wounds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:54:14 AM AEST
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What an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: heart wounds
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:27:25 AM AEST
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| I love the imagery very cool scarey and beautifull in that sad kinda way |
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Re: heart wounds
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:07:25 PM AEST
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Intense write, very powerful, know where you're coming from. The lines that stood out to me most were:
The wounds that bleed, the knife that shines
The scars I hide are mine
I love your style and rythmn, well done
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