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Life
Contributed by
JamesHowlett
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Life
Let the clouds weep my tears,
Let the wind howl my cries.
I shall not show my fears,
I’ll hide within lies.
The ground beneath my feet,
The world rushing by.
All I hear is my heart beat,
As I make the world rush by.
I play the game,
A master, a thief.
I hide my fears in shame,
With the pounding of my feet.
Day after day,
Game after game.
It’s a terrible game to play,
I’ll hide my fears in shame.
I’ll always play,
I’ll always win, lose.
Until the day,
When I have to choose.
Copyright ©
JamesHowlett
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2003-06-03 01:05:00]
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Re: Life
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:12:46 AM AEST
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| very powerful poem, short but provides a good view into your life(or whoever it's about) very good, i enjoyed it! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Life
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by JamesDylan on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:42:18 PM AEST
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| Please know that you can always show your fears to me, you can vent to me always. Never feel like you are alone because I will always be here for you! This is a good poem, all your poems are good. Keep writing!! |
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Re: Life
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:23:49 PM AEST
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Good poem but you are far from unique. We all play this game to a greater or lesser extent.
Try not to dwell on it
Some never make the choice, time overtakes them. |
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Re: Life
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:20:12 PM AEST
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very emotional I enjoyed this I can relate completely. I liked this very much keep up the good work.
theresa (lovesucks) |
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Re: Life
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:32:59 AM AEST
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This was a very expressive poem, I can relate all to well, you put into words what I could not. Thank you. Keep writing
theresa
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