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This is what you've done to me
Contributed by
Sweetie
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Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:32:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You left me standing in the rain that day
speechless with no words to say
You said you had enough of all I put you through
Now I don't know what to do
Scared and hopeless I go on each day
waiting for my dreams to come my way
I'm like a boat sailing on dry land
with no one to reach out and hold my hand
No one to be there when I'm cold
no one to laugh with, to be with, and to hold
I'm like a cloud drifting in an endless sky
I drive myself crazy and your the reason why
I am the darkness in the night
as I shiver with loneliness and full of fright
I'm like the hot air searching for some relief
I'm like a waterfall in the river searching for belief
Can't you see all you've done to me
You still mean so much to me
You left me lonely, You stole my heart
You ripped my whole world completely apart
This is what you've done to me
Copyright ©
Sweetie
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2002-08-06 13:32:34]
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Re: This is what you've done to me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:40:57 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful, although it is so sad.. You write very well, Sweetie... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...
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Re: This is what you've done to me
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by spaceotter on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 02:08:44 PM AEST
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| Squeeze that sorrow out!! Good write! :) |
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Re: This is what you've done to me
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 03:14:51 AM AEST
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| So sad, and yet I can so relate to this. Just like the wind that brought you these words, so do loves come and go. When will prince charming show up for us good guys??? When does our someday start??? I fell you girl, keep writting, and hey! atleast you have us here on YPDC to share your faults and triumphs, and we'll love you unconditionally. Take care hun. |
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Re: This is what you've done to me
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:57:43 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem it was good although it was sad. Very well written. Remember just stand strong. |
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Re: This is what you've done to me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:58:39 PM AEST
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i can relate.. very well written!
Sara |
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Re: This is what you've done to me
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by hetlerkh on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 07:26:42 PM AEST
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no more words to add after those people's comments ..
just great .!
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