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i was Wrong
Contributed by
ghstangel76
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Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I thought the hurt was ending.
I thought the pain had gone,
but now I turned the corner and discovered i was wrong.
The pain's returned anew, the tears again are falling.
As my arms ache to hold you my mind,
your name, keeps calling.
Now I find I look for you amongst the baby's I see.
I wonder what you would do
and think of how it would be.
At times I catch your eyes in the faces around me.
And no matter how I try, from this pain, I can't get free.
Yes, I thought that I was better,
though it hasn't been that long.
But now I see things clearer and admit that I was wrong.
The road ahead's just starting with
its path not yet in view,
still I know pitfalls await me.
as I journey along with you
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ghstangel76
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2003-06-02 23:05:00]
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Re: i was Wrong
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 11:35:19 PM AEST
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| That was good. Nice write. |
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Re: i was Wrong
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 11:54:47 PM AEST
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Awww Jen...it never goes away...believe me.. after 17 yrs....I still wonder!!
Welcome to ypdc....
Jenni |
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Re: i was Wrong
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:29:03 AM AEST
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| Nicely written poem ... very sad, but well done... Jan |
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